Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Teenage and adulthood are two different times of one's life. While many people think that they enjoyed there adolescent years, others opine the fact that adult life is more delightful regardless of responsibilities. Both time period have their own values and provide us happiness in different ways.
Teenage is considered to be the happiest time by most of the people and there are many reasons for the same. Firstly, people in their youthful years are less bounded by cares and responsibilities as compared to mature people, as there is no tension of earning money and making career. For example, many school trips and parties are organised at that moment of life which allows them to enjoy to the fullest with the friends.
On the flipside, adulthood gives us many joyful moments. Most of the people in this age are quite balanced and logical, these qualities helps to improve their personal and social life which eventually led them to happiness. Moreover, there are times when adults do well in their respective fields and make their parents proud, these moments are also exuberant.
In conclusion, teenage and adult life gives people happiness evenly. In teenage there is lack of burden which make life more joyous, whereas there many proud moments and maturity level which keeps people happy even in middle-age. In my opinion, one should enjoy both phases of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'many schools'.
Suggestion: many schools
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... keeps people happy even in middle-age. In my opinion, one should enjoy both phase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05701754386 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49824114799 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3182419734 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338326872658 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125341568386 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748872501293 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203090489084 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612365258481 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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