Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a women role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals women empowerment has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain regarding this. In my opinion women should be given equal chances to work and excel in career instead the only taking care of children and home. I will discuss points in further paragraphs.
To commence with, women should be given equal rights to work and excel in their career . Firstly, women can do high pay job so in which they can save money for their future as well as their children career. Moreover, government should provide equality education for women as well as they should provide awareness as regarding women empowerment.
In addition to it, women get equal opportunities for do work and excel their career. In modern times enormous online jobs are available which women get hired online job eventually they can earn money at home with the help of part time job. Furthermore, part time job women can care their children and family because they can do job online because it is available into home. For example, higher authority had proved working women can better care of their children compare to other women.
In conclusion, it is the responsibility of government and individual should given equal chances to women for their career excel and future prospects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99590163934 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57555224908 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52868852459 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5559051198 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398000617043 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163532723809 0.0925447433944 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137219381017 0.071462118173 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262458893603 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514154493493 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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