Some people think that younger employees often have more skills, knowledge and motivation than the old employees. To what extent do you agree with it? Use your experience.
The importance of senior employees, which frequently generated a great deal of debate, has recently become more controversial. Some proponents believe that younger employees often have more skills, knowledge, and motivation than the old ones while others claimed that senior staff plays an important role in the development of companies. This essay will elaborate on how young people are crucial and how older employees are essential for organizations.
At the outset, there is a myriad of reasons why freshers are more skilful, knowledgeable and motivated but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that they have no fear to achieve their goal. Obviously, after graduating from universities, most students are confident with their knowledge to step into dynamic working environments. However, knowledge is just one of the elements to lead them to career success. In real situations, experience has a great impact on decision making and can pinpoint the underlying issue in cooperation.
Moving on to consider the opposing arguments put forward by critics, some people believe that senior workers contribute the most significance to companies. In particular, although in some countries, companies must pay them a higher salary than juniors, they require less training on jobs. Moreover, they are often professional and mostly stay with companies longer than freshers. Therefore, it is necessary to have senior staff in companies.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, from a personal perspective, I am inclined to believe good employees cannot be determined by their ages but by their performance and their experience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53174603175 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05958299821 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7463605238 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237516127951 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728740172717 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637004996719 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122494717347 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710229090817 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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