Some people thinks that law changes human behaviour. Discuss this and give your opinion
The importance of law in human life, which has always been debated, has now become more controversial. It can be agreed that law defiantly change human behaviour towards breaking law, but it has some drawbacks as well. This essay will elaborate both pros and cons of the impact of law on human behaviour and lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly, there are numerous reasons why law affects human behaviour but the most conspicuous one lies on the fact that people stop breaking laws. It is also proving that crime rate of city will go down. For instance, number of laws are introduced on road to prevent accident which means people must change their behaviour and thinking towards new laws. Those new rules are also introduced with high penalties. Thus, high penalties and increasing laws are changing human behaviour.
On the contrary, some people adopt opposing view that law cannot change human behaviour. There are some people who never affected by any kind of change. An illustration, old age people don’t worry about laws when they drive vehicles. In some cases, people don’t want to change themselves. Another example, there are many laws in India, but no one follows most of them because hard to get penalties.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that law can change human behaviour although its depend on human nature. Thus, it proves that laws change human behaviour.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02118644068 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48781503385 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5150221692 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46727955414 0.242375264174 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167838114651 0.0925447433944 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107708029268 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291838262738 0.151781067708 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218129944567 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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