some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool
level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Music plays a vital role in everybody’s life. It has a huge influence and is also of great importance if it’s
introduced at the primary level when the children are curious and at their prime of learning everything.
I agree that it’s of pivotal importance to introduce music at preschool for better child development
to open their minds to a new whole better world.
It’s undeniable that musicians with their words and rhythm often leave an impact. It’s often
suggested in therapy for spiritual purification of body mind and soul. It helps control anger and a sense
of calmness when they are in their growing age.
On the other hand, it can bring out the hidden talent of a kid in the form of singing, dancing and
instrumentation enhancing their creativity and memorizing abilities. The form of music they are
passionate about can help shape their careers at a young age, for eg;- the musical talent shows
which helps a kid to get out there learn from the best adapt to the competition and constantly
changing world.
Furthermore, it helps kids in memorizing their alphabets and tables, helping them engage in fun
and prolific environment.
In conclusion, introducing music at preschools can help kids to develop a passionate form of art
for themselves and control their anger and hyperactivity by keeping them grounded hence, bringing
out the thirst in them to do something.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ual purification of body mind and soul. It helps control anger and a sense of cal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0643776824 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83279359581 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3663370738 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.12807881773 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131382111856 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519266035442 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537491042321 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451569578131 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599180115002 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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