Space travelling is fantastic these days, but there are many issues such as environmental problems that we should be focusing on. What are your views on the allocation of public funding?
In the fast pacing world, space travelling is the field which has grabbed the attention of many current scientists. but it has been a debatable topic, as some individuals believe that legislation should focus first on eradicating basic environmental and health problems of a community. As per my perspective, both are mandatory and there should be a balance between the two’s.
To begin with, space travelling helps to explore our nearby comets and galaxies, like weather patterns and soil types. so, they can prove to be boon for our humankind in near future. For instance, researchers are continuously studying our planet called Mars, and they claim that its climate has a close resemblance to our planet earth. therefore, with space travelling we can start a new life in earth in near future. Hence, space study proves to be a boon for our archeologists.
On the contrary, every rose has its thorns, therefore space travelling has some pros. Firstly, this field requires a lot of monetary needs, which eventually affects our society economically to a great extent. Furthermore, no one knows about exactly knows about future happenings, and everyone have their own prediction. so, government should focus on present and should spend their time and money on uplifting the life of the society, as many community members are lacking in basic facilities like proper and education which is ultimately the need of an hour.
In conclusion, space travelling is fantastic and have myriad benefits in the development of science but also has some negative aspects too which cannot be neglected. therefore, there should be proper balance between the two’s for acquiring great results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22794117647 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85482616624 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7238959097 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196288707317 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665555309984 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414293729365 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122122631827 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413210764175 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.