Sports and games create disturbance in student's life because student's cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Too much of anything is bad, we need balancing factors to be successful. if a student’s life is filled with studies and no sports, then the outcome is a failure. In simple words, no play and no study studies will make harry a dull boy. Not only harry but Marry will also become a dull girl. I completely disagree with the above- mentioned question.
sports are also subject in some of the colleges. if we search the internet then w can find some universities are offering phD in sports Management or sports Sciences. thus, it has proved that sports are a form of education which teaches students discipline, efficiency, activeness, teamwork and most importantly sportsman spirit. students are already stressed with the strict regimen and course curriculum. so, playing games can help them in reducing the stress factor in their day to day life.
Investing in health will make one’s life better. most students are in the growth stage of their life and therefore games can help in their proper growth. When we talk about growth, it can be in terms of height, weight and mental health. so, sports and studies are interrelated. As sports helps in improvement of psychological and physiological aspects of students, and with improved health, a student excels in studies.
In this fast moving and competitive world, all-rounder is a real winner. one has to be good in studies and at the same time, one has to be outstanding in extracurricular activities like sports. A mixture of indoor and outdoor games will be a perfect combination. indoor games like chess can help in improving the decision making capability. Whereas, outdoor games like football and basketball can improve the physical agility.
thus, sports hamper the student’s life rather facilitates him to excel in studies and in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05980066445 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87848399962 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6551724138 166% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.293649754 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5238095238 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17708313617 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528614151688 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047937601987 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105630848411 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516193749094 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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