Students with degree earn high salary than who doesn’t have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion?
The importance of students earning high salary having an academic qualification compared with people doesn't have qualification was always a debatable topic. Some people argue that students drawing good amount have to pay full college fees. Others reject this notion and claim that leads to discrimination. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate both aspects with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, in fast growing competition world, education is the main factor to get settled job. Students with high degree and qualification are the first preference for the any organizations to hire. As these people are economically well settled in career they must pay entire course fee to college institutions. For instance, students who can afford to pay fees are depending on the government provided scholarships. There are people who are more intelligent but their financial situation may not support them to join and pay for the course fees.
On the other hand, some people argue that it leads to discrimination among students. Not all students are well settled and to achieve this respectable position they struggled a lot. Firstly, government has to bring policies for the students who cannot afford their fees. For instance, in Italy, government has introduced a new scheme for students who are not able to pay their fees and released student funds. This example exemplifies us that government has to take certain steps to bring out hidden talents who can serve the nation in better way.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that leads to misunderstanding among students and further the education departments to take and bring new policies for the students who are not well settled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29109589041 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94105114781 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9679070474 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27091967401 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856588576562 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729169497012 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156864833139 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078498646958 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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