Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead to antisocial behavior, can team sports really be good for us?
In this world, every country have sports academy with fantastic players and promote team at national and international level. Some people believe that sport are not good for society which give bad character and violence and other people argue that people should promote the sports as it provides health fitness and good character. I will discuss bad and good influences on society with solutions and give a logical conclusion.
Firstly, sports have a numerous influences which can vary and depend upon on players. Sports cannot be without spectators and fans are all around. Sport like soccer is an energetic game where players get emotional and some time they create and oppose the opposite team players as well. During high voltage and competitive match, players create violence and quarrelled to each other due wrong decision provide by umpires. As a solution if rules and regulation levy on player if they show bad behaviour. Players playing a game show patience or bad behaviour are onus for spectators.
Secondly, All sports are well if we play in stringent boundary of discipline and regulations. Some spectators inspire from player and they create their wish to become like them. They imitate to get into sport if they watch any sports from child age with proper guide. For example, in cricket, Sachin Tendulkar became legend as he has many fans and fans pursue him with his dedication and discipline. Sports always provide benefits to our society in terms of literacy of fitness or dedications.
Ultimately, as aforementioned every sport must be promoted as it creates life line in our society. I would recommend if we have good management surveillance like referee and umpires at ground then there could not be violence and temperament loose of players.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 8.36945812808 263% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09310344828 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62447322159 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7202126778 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211959088284 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705135354472 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572774571376 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129265420275 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340606499822 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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