Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour,can team spors really be good for us?
Some people think that sporting events result in violence acts. This happens especially when one team wins its rival but the rival team supporters are not satisfied with the results. The outcome may be dangerous. However, others believe that team sports are to generate peace in the stadium.
In my opinion, team sports help us to grow as human being. First of all, team sports teach us to become disciplined because we are contending with many other players, developing a good, sportive spirit. Thus, we learn to live with different cultural players.
Moreover, not only do team sports ward off possible strives among rival teams, but they also give the opportunity to everyone who dream of becoming a professional player, to attend a match. For instance, one of my friends who had a complicated childhood, could never participate in a game due to financial constraints on the family. However, he succeeded in life and became a famous athlete.
Finally, team sports were made with the intention to promote peace among players and they bring welfare to people who crave for being part of them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1207.87684729 76% => OK
No of words: 184.0 242.827586207 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96195652174 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5644746069 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 379.143842365 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0617758672 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255321627826 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940994416396 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761659312156 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149517593985 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076272094276 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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