Are all the jobs equal? Are skilled and unskilled employees treated equally? Have you heard of manual scavengers? Write about the problems faced by unskilled employees. What do you suggest to people to stop doing discrimination?
manual scavengers are people who remove and dispose of animal and human excreta. very often, people who are involved in this kind of work are discriminated against and are ill-treated by society in general.
Dr. Babasaheb Ambedkar and Bezwada Wilson brought to light the miserable
state of manual scavengers. many organizations are fighting for the eradication of manual scavenging and the rehabilitation of manual scavengers.
Now, efforts are being made to introduce a bill to put an end to the undignified practice of manual scavenging and to rehabilitate manual scavengers.
There are some jobs that require people to work in dangerous conditions. For example, miners have to go deep under the ground to mine coal and other minerals. They work in hazardous conditions—there are possibilities of the mine collapsing and sometimes this proves to be fatal; there are also toxic gasses underground that
affect humans. miners suffer from many occupational diseases like silicosis. silicosis is a respiratory disease caused by inhaling silica. It can cause a severe cough, shortness of breath and weight loss. Sadly, miners are usually paid a measly wage.
some jobs involve a lot of manual, unskilled work, and some involve skilled labor and very little manual work. some jobs are well paid, while others are not.
The most important thing to learn here is that all jobs are equally important. We must never belittle any kind of work or discriminate against any job or group of
people performing a job. Great leaders like Gandhiji and others have emphasized the dignity of labor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lled labor and very little manual work. some jobs are well paid, while others are no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, for example, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2421875 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89783728624 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7916887377 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9411764706 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176156943226 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049795038902 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433692935426 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068563904911 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429938040811 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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