With the development of information communication technology, music is also available online to freely access. There is a heated debate whether songs published on internet should be permitted to access free of charge or not. This essay will discuss that internet affects musicians to getting popular and it diminishes their income as well.
Generally, freely available music tend to discourage singers and composers. Since songs freely available on the internet, general public do not purchase albums and it dramatically decreases the income of singers and composers. For instance, songs belong to modern and golden eras can be played and also downloaded from web sites such as YouTube for frequent usage without any hindrance. Therefore, a mechanism should be implemented to arrange an income for the artists from online platforms.
On the other hand, singers and songs get more popular after publishing on internet. Nowadays people browse internet rather than using traditional media such as radio and television. For instance, there are myriad of younger musicians who got popular because of their presence in YouTube and Facebook. Hence, online platforms have become an avenue for the widespread popularity in the music world.
In summary, although publishing songs on internet causes reduction in musicians’ revenue, it helps them to getting popular among audiences. In my opinion, while publishing free songs on the internet, a method should be secured to generate revenue source for the benefit of people involve in the music field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...songs freely available on the internet, general public do not purchase albums and it dramatica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in summary, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48333333333 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79184079059 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.907921295 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160171267902 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623838182486 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650005395199 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106764793723 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519986396142 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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