With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How can old people be encouraged to use this new technology?
Technology is changing the way we live today. There are lots of features in the modern technological devices including mobile phones and internet, which can help the people to contact each other from any corner of the world. This essay will discuss how these modern technology can help older people, who are less aware of the techniques and the advancements of its uses.
At the outset, there are myriad of uses for the mobile phones and internet as it help the people to get all the things at the fingertip suddenly. Today, younger generations are getting more exposed to the mobile phones and internet surfing, and to contact the person as soon as they need through phone call or by video conferencing. So, younger generations are more exposed to the advanced technologies and knowledge than elder people.
On the other hand, the older generation people are less aware of these technologies, because of the generation gap and the lack of knowledge about the technological growth. For instance, if we give a mobile phone to our grandparent, they can use the video conferencing to see their children and grand children if they are far from them. In this modern world, they should know the proper use of mobile phones and internet surfing much more as most of them are living alone. By leaning all theses techniques help them to contact a person when they are in need.
In conclusion, in this tech-savvy era, the invention of mobile phones and internet brought a lot of things for humans. So, in my opinion each and every people should know the use of mobile phones and internet as it will help the elder people as it help them when they are alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75347222222 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54479306427 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465277777778 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1485955199 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313508178257 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124363561044 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722811690445 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218770855597 0.151781067708 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404098601415 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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