There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
Nowadays, using new inventions has become a long-running dispute among the people all over the world, which leads to a moot question “which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life?”. It is a widely held view that the Internet as a novel invention is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the Internet as a new invention plays a vital role in the fast-changing world. Therefore, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that the online technology has made life so convenient and people are able to hold a video conference across the world in the fields of education, medicine, and telecommunication as well as purchase their basic needs online. Secondly, these days an extensive range of medical treatments, such as remote surgery is being operated by the Internet without physical presence. In addition to this information, a group of scientists, working at a prestigious university conducted that the cyber technology, quick access to the information, and exploring the space can be carried out simply by the Internet in the computer.
However, undoubtedly using the Internet as a new invention provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that a wide variety of crimes, such as cybercrime, illegal access to private information, and exploiting juveniles are rooted on the Internet. Moreover, this technology has made people more likely isolated and introvert as well as the community has become significantly sedentary.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the Internet as a new invention to raise public awareness must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...I firmly believe that the Internet as a new invention to raise public awareness must be taken...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 312.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09364446805 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5046726931 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2176389912 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680618872419 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12275576761 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13512786465 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147050983306 0.0609392437508 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.