There are a lot of invention nowdays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. what are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
Recently, the phenomenon of the evolutionary invention and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that communication tools highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that smart gadgets can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From digital devices standpoint, state-of-the-art technology can provide the society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that improving technology, as well as technology breakthrough, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which deciphered global village. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both cutting-edge design devices and widespread use of the computer can be seen.
Within the realm of computer terminals, saving time and effort might increase the consequences of the high rate of processing. Moreover, fundamental aspects of improving passive lifestyle relate to this reality that the demerits of globalization pertain to social-economic improvement. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of acquiring the latest news is correlated negatively with social media. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of keeping up with the latest news.
To conclude, while three are several compelling arguments of both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of technology far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of artificial intelligent prove the significance of management information system, but also pinpoints of social networks implications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'devices'' or 'device's'?
Suggestion: devices'; device's
... throughout this essay. From digital devices standpoint, state-of-the-art technology...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proof' (noun) instead of prove (verb)?
Suggestion: proof
...he advantages of artificial intelligent prove the significance of management informat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88715953307 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43953025323 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677042801556 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5166629646 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0545212246783 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0168044697948 0.0925447433944 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229228402018 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0298140699113 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173907851311 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.44 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 55.0591133005 200% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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