There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
Recently, the invention of cell phones has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the positive and negative consequences?". Whereas it is a widely held that smartphones are highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the economic standpoint, cellphones are bound up inextricably with today’s modern lifestyle, which indicates they lead to sufficient use of both money and time. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between high-tech gadgets, and economic growth as well as an exponential increase in people’s wellbeing. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of smartphones is correlated positively with not only economic progression but also improving individuals welfare.
Within the realm of psychological science, without the slightest doubt, smartphones attribute to cyber crimes, in that it would come down to bullying, cheating, and children pornography. A salient example of such attribution is people’s isolation, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take depression for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint behavioral problems. Besides, this criterion is an indispensable part of modern lifestyle. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of mobile phones.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes " all's well that end's well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that smartphones are of high importance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive that the more we research, the further we discover.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82656826568 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3908046038 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 139.433497537 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693726937269 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3838283081 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0599406679703 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176518583663 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297819516392 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396328057158 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028999928523 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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