These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In today's era, lifestyle of people has been changed so dramatically, and thus their source of enjoyment has also been altered with respect to time, which in turn has made people to go for live sporting and cultural events by paying heft money on tickets. Therefore, I am going to reveal both negative and positive developments.
To begin with, people earn and toil relentlessly to have an opulence and an enjoyable lifestyle, and hence it is fair to spend money on such interesting events on account of multifarious reasons. Firstly, these are the events which connect people with the roots of their religion, values and help people to be more patriotic and down to earth. On the top of that, these activities allow people to know more about sports and cultures as a result, people get an essence of both enjoyment as well as a sort of medium to acquire knowledge, which allow people to get relief from stress.. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that people who like such events are likely to be more creative and wise.
On the other hand, every problem comes with solutions, which is similar in this case. Money is one of most vital factors for bringing change in someone's life, therefore it should be utilized in a proper way, else it can exhibit manifold repercussions. Firstly, spending of money on these activities ultimately results nothing for the people, and many times young people in order to maintain their status among their friends buy such tickets, irrespective of thinking about their financial condition, which is an utterly erroneous. In addition, these activities are merely profit oriented, and buying exorbitant tickets can bring jeopardy on the budget of a person, which is again noteworthy.
In conclusion, I believe that people should enjoy and spend money by taking their financial conditions and other important factors into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, as well as, to begin with, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04220779221 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65149041423 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.805882708 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.181818182 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8181818182 7.25397266985 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224102739455 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084172882968 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403620862302 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137007434613 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359261839112 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.