The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem. What problem will this shortage of time causes.
The time people devote to job leaves very little time for personal life has always been a debatable topic. Many believe that this shortage of time may cause problems for both health and damage to human relationships. I personally believe that not giving enough time to their own space might lead to a dispute between husband and wife. This essay would further elaborate the problems caused by giving little time for personal life with reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, due to the high increase in unemployment rate and heavy competition for jobs, employees are trying their level best to give outputs to the company by spending a considerable amount of hours more than normal working policies in office. Spending long hours in the office, pressure from managers and project deadlines created by clients are the main reasons to lose their personal space which indeed leading them to start to ignore personal lives. It creates disputes among families and between husband and spouse which may lead to divorce in some cases. For example, because of extreme pressure on employees to deliver the product on time, employees are asked to work on weekends instead of spending time with their families.
Secondly, increased standard of living, variations in lifestyles, project deadlines and competitive market can cause more stress for the employees. For instance, a recent study conducted by the University of California on software employees shows that out of 100 employees 88 people are suffering from stress management disorder. Furthermore, it is the responsibility of organizations and managers to provide space between personal lives and professional careers.
According to the arguments outlined above, one can reach out to a conclusion that healthy balance between personal life and professional life is required to lead a prosperous life and further the organizations need to bring some policies that benefit employees to lead happy and spend a good time with their families.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 322.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27950310559 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75165794844 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5291043346 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32085944111 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134053106303 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147752133012 0.071462118173 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19466362158 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184903518424 0.0609392437508 303% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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