Tourism industry is benefit for any country or not
In recent year, there has been a noticeable shift from industry to services such as tourism. People believe that tourism industry will greatly contribute to economic growth while others suggest that the industry will have a minimal contribution to economy. This essay will discuss why countries should integrate tourism into their development agenda.
The development of commercial air flight and low cost transport makes travelling affordable to many people. Tourism generates a number of employment opportunities for locals. For instance, a visitor will have demand on accommodation, transportation, dining services and entertainments. This benefits both businesses operating these services and their suppliers such as food suppliers and electricity and gas providers. With a good strategy to drive the industry, tourism creates jobs and increases spending in local community. As a result, government should promote tourism industry.
It has become more and more competitive because many countries have developed their tourism industry. To attract visitors, local businesses have to constantly keep up to date and focus on developing their products or services to boost customers spending and give their customers unique experiences. A good reputation will bring more visitors coming to a country as well as keep them coming back. This boosts the creativity of local people and businesses; and therefore, there is no reason why government should limit their resources to develop this sector.
This essay argued that countries should support the tourism industry. In my opinion, this creates jobs in local community and accelerates the development of creative businesses.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.704 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98556527311 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0920776207 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232879841608 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826488659971 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634980169408 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142698704195 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06369040595 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.