In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinions and give examples.
The issue of tourism in underdeveloped countries has become a matter of discussion for quit some years now, although some quarters of the society are engaged in discussing this vital topic, Yet, there has been no substantial result. I will discuss merits and demerits of tourism in underdeveloped nations and give my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, if outsiders will visit in underdeveloped countries, they can get knowledge about their culture and language, due to which it improve their communication skills and they can also learn other languages. Moreover, the economy of that country will be improved and tourist places will get name and fame. Furthermore, tourists can also setup their business in other countries, because of this they can also bright their future. Besides this, the native people of that underdeveloped nation can learn many things from tourists and it also increase the rate of employment, because many individuals get employments in the tourist places and museums.
On the other hand, some people are opposite of this point they say the culture and traditions of that country will be disappeared, because the native citizens of that region will also follow foreign style. Apart from this, the hidden secrets of that country will be shown in front of the tourists, like army related information, because of this they can misuse of that information.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion people should visit in other countries, it is more beneficial for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1439688716 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76390063029 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.688508689 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194066316825 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826571573434 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583066411721 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114125779662 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058270676577 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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