What are the advantages and disadvantages of mass media?
A little retrospection would reveal and history has witnessed that mass media is ubiquitous in this present era. In this essay, I will discuss both merits and demerits of this phenomenon.
To embark with, numerous benefits are associated to the electronic media. The most prominent is, it is good source of knowledge as there is ample cognitive content is available on the media which explore our horizons. What is more, undoubtedly, people are rooted to their routines due to this they have no time to spend their precious time with family members, consequently, they can able to communicate with their near and dear ones. For instance, Facebook , a social app give opportunities to common individual to connect with their family members as well as friends.
Nevertheless, every moon has its dark side, so, mass media also have few drawbacks. The first and foremost is, multitudes become a victim of isolation as they likely to spend more and more time on watching movies and surf on internet which led to individualism. Needless to say, inhabitants also sacrifice their sleeping hours with their working hours as people can work in their homes with the help of mass media due to this they also faces so many health issues such as, eye strain, social withdrawal or stress. Thus, mass media has bad impacts on society.
To conclude, I firmly believe, mass media play a crucial role in modern era which has lots of benefits to common people. However, it also has few drawbacks which are unavoidable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67012738632 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7067437337 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179748678921 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769619319964 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717247085864 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108234909664 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262792566431 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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