What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of living in rural areas and how it can be solved?
A littler retrospection would reveal and history has been witnessed that individuals like to live in metropolitan cities. There are lots of benefits of living in the developed cities. However, in this essay, I will discuss the problems in rural areas and solutions to short out these problems.
At the outset, numerous factors are associated to advantage of big cities. The most prominent is, to get all the basic necessities of life, people attracts towards big cities as it has Developed roads, good infrastructure, uninterrupted water and electricity supply. What is more, people get better transport facilities and Medical helps in urban areas rather than rural areas. In urban areas, we can easily find that toilets on roads as opposed to rural areas. In any emergency, we can easily get medical help as there are various hospitals and institutions has already been made in urban areas, not in rural areas. Thus, big cities are more convenient for living.
Nevertheless, there are also some solutions to address these problems. The first and foremost is, In order to improve the life of rural area, Many Organizations, Government, Academics, Nonprofit organization should come forward and provide financial support to the people. Government should take necessary steps to provide the basic facilities to the people like electricity & water supply, medical & transport facilities etc. On the other hand, People should also take initiative to keep the areas neat & clean, maintain the security, encourage people to educate their children and help the organization by co-operating with them.
In conclusion, I firmly believe, If all these steps will be taken in order, we hope that soon the problem of rural areas will get resolve. People live the same life in rural areas as they live in urban areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
.... The most prominent is, to get all the basic necessities of life, people attracts towards big ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in conclusion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23367697595 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80448107015 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7851246812 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328743925127 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108371209936 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853970247944 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207823035995 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910480874667 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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