What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in developing countries.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in developing countries.

Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals tourism has been one of most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. People have been intrigued to analyze and explain whether merits and demerits of tourism in developing countries. I will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this notion in further elaborating paragraphs.
To begin with, there are enormous benefits of tourism in developed countries. Firstly, tourism boosts the economic growth of country and also opens new profitable ventures for locals. Moreover, local business is accelerated but also more job ventures are created for the local pollution. For instance, local business like hotels and restaurants will be highly benefited with the increased influx of tourists.
On the other hand, there are some demerits of tourism in different countries. Firstly, sometime tourism people behavior is very aggressive so this type of person can create conflicts between countries. Furthermore, tourism spread pollution into country which they are thrown waste things into land so it leads to pollution in environment.
In conclusion, tourism has some pros. And cons in developing countries it provide gives the enormous beneficial opportunities of local people but some problems are create which is detrimental for human being.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56132075472 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89345559179 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608490566038 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1387427777 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6923076923 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278167968716 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101673754852 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900599521271 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151114756351 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052471685615 0.0609392437508 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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