What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
There are more benefits of living in the big cities compared to the living in the rural area has created a chaos in the country. Some people opine that the city is better for the living while some are in against of the stance. However, I firmly believe that the city is more convenient for living. In this essay, I am going to deliver both sides before jumping to the conclusion
There are myriad of reasons for living in the city but the top benefits are like the transportation, employment, medical facilities, and education. In addition, people can leave with the full liberty and without any disruptions. Moreover, apart from the above, one can enjoy the all the government's benefits as well as other entertainment facilities which are quite necessary for today.
However, there are also negative points co-exist with the above positive points. Firstly, people in the rural area are not enjoying liberty and even not allows others to appreciate. Secondly, in terms of focal conveniences, rural area is generally deficient in that. For instance, as per the recent news of the trusted resources, there were many people transported from rural area to the city for curing of a hyperactive disease called dengue owing to scare of the medical equipment & facilities of requiring technology.
To sum up, the aforementioned discussion, one can reach the conclusion, the city area is a better for the living as it is developing with the time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98760330579 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78711735799 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54958677686 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7161329033 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.727272727 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.25397266985 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.538469609499 0.242375264174 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204234561973 0.0925447433944 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.214181651218 0.071462118173 300% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317454923156 0.151781067708 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263447043223 0.0609392437508 432% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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