what are the positive and negative aspects of the connection to the outside world including mobile phones, emails and social networking.
In this advanced technological era, people are running with advanced technology to reach the peak point in all fields. Some people believe that connecting the outer world with mobile phones and social networking sites have many advantages while other disagrees with this statement. I believe that it has both advantages and disadvantages with connecting the world via mobiles, emails and social networking sites. The reasons are
On the one hand, there are many advantages with connecting people outside world communication is very vital role these days and mobile phones help with it. Social media, which in very famous in all age groups and become a crucial part. People are update with the worldwide information. According to the report by United Nations social media association, more than 90% of the people all over the world using the mobile phone and social networks to get latest news and information required for them.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages by continuous using of mobile phones; peoples are becoming very lazy, due to using mobile where they can get any information where they stood without any hard work. By using the social media people personal information can be hacked by the hackers. According the report the cybercrime department, 70% of the crime are done today by using the social networking site, by taking the details by social networking sites like face book and twitter. It is also proven in last few months that face book in not providing the security for the people.
In conclusion, there are many advantages with social networks, if it used in a right way. It provide the daily news around the world and entertainment and many more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: get the latest
...the mobile phone and social networks to get latest news and information required for them....
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ntages with social networks, if it used in a right way. It provide the daily news around the w...
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...networks, if it used in a right way. It provide the daily news around the world and ent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05714285714 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59118403319 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7735774627 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183692540136 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685837991439 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555460175774 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114107747207 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364217587076 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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