What are the positive and negative aspects of the connection to outside world including mobile phone, email and social networking?
Recently, using the internet has become popular, and people have used it to communicate with people from other countries. Some people believe that connecting with people from outside countries has a positive impact on their character, while others argue that communicating with strange people could be risky and has a negative impact. This essay will discuss the positive and negative impacts of creating a relationship with people from outside world.
Creating a relationship with strange people from outside countries either through using Skype or Facebook enables individuals from identifying new cultures. People will become familiar with traditions of other people who live on the other side of the world. Recent research, which was conducted in the USA, has shown that people have become more popular with habits of strange people. Therefore, contacting with people who locate in the different region of the world is beneficial and has a positive impact on a human character.
On the other hand, some people said that contacting with people live outside their countries affects negatively on their family relationships. Due to this invention, family members relationships have been affected so badly, because they have spent less time together. But these people are unaware of the fact that this new invention has enabled people from widening their knowledge, and they have more friends, Thus, even there are some negatives from contacting with people from outside the world, but the benefits are more than the negatives.
In conclusion, using different methods of communication with other people from outside of the world has advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, their benefits are greatest than their negatives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...eople are unaware of the fact that this new invention has enabled people from widening their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45724907063 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69875162247 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490706319703 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1793781105 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100485572182 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538730194058 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516638041828 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767115640751 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239904562045 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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