What are the positive and negative of tourism in developing countries?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of the people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that the tourism has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. In this essay I will discuss some advantages and disadvantages of the tourism for developing countries.
Let’s begin by looking at the positives of the tourism. One of the major effect on the economy. Tourism play vital role in the employment sector such as hotels and cafes. Some people work as a tour guide and in restaurants. As a result they create plethora of opportunities for employment.
Turning towards to negative side of the argument, nowadays ample diseases are in the community which can transfer from one country to another. Moreover, in the developing countries they are seen as a soft target and they are going through threat of kidnapping and so on. So the local government can suffer from problems related to the safety and security.
To conclude, tourism play cardinal role for developing countries. We have to overweigh the merits of economic growth and the demerits of security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 191.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07853403141 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86953984627 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602094240838 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.95539834 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6153846154 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246319854616 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668565946805 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692048974966 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121695169808 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102199890005 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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