With the rise in the use of internet facilities results in generation of several problems in our society. Discuss the problems and its solutions.

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With the rise in the use of internet facilities results in generation of several problems in our society. Discuss the problems and its solutions.

Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals internet usage has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain. Regarding, this I would say, it has many obstacles like health, crime and many more and can be solved by implementing the solutions will be discussed in this essay.

To begin with its hitch, firstly it has the vast effect on our body like people get many diseases due to it. For example, obesity, it happens by setting for long time and when persons do not go to work out. Secondly, the cyber crime is on the peak point due to lack of awareness such as child trafficking, hacking etc.
In the solutions, it is a duty of administration to set a time restriction on the daily based internet so that public can also spend some time for playing out door and by the end they can remain fit. Moreover, clans should adopt high security features like ant viruses and children can get award by their parents. Thus, this glitch can be solved with the synergy of association and population.
To sum up with, everything comes in the market with its own pros and cons but it depends on person that how they use it. Although, several obstacles can be identified of the internet but it can be resolved by various ways.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, such as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62096774194 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56558103271 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4902177445 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126276404441 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419527167421 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511521816345 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799565242522 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519539332151 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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