What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.
In this day and age of modern era, where internet has become significant part of society and individuals, mentioned subject regarding availability on social media for complete day having pros and cons become a heated debate. While some people advocates its significance whereas some other commodity disregards this phenomenon because of its benefits and negative impact. This essay will discuss all the corresponding point in favors of pros and cons by analyzing topic theme.
Firstly, globalization is dependent on internet as it bring globe in your hand with help of devices. Everyone busy in their life and job which cut them off from their social circle and due to lack of time they are not able to join their family and friends. Social media gives them opportunity to stay connect, this social media is distance and time zone independent. Being active or 24 hour on social media like ‘Facebook’ and “Whatup” provide them platform to get in touch with any corner of world any time. Activity on social media provides them information of current affairs around the world.
However, in averse the other commodity believes staying connected on social media create distance in family with whom we are leaving, it creates distance as we get busy on our virtual world and circle which is not very good of society. The social media’s being an addiction in adolescents and causing distraction from their aim. The prominent reason to stay away from social media it impact on individuals health and we have seen many accident happens due to distraction form road while driving.
To conclude, after accumulating my thought I would be acquaint with these prominent point, Social media is very good platform to get in touch with over loved one, other hand it creating distance and drag us in to virtual world. We should use it an appropriate manner to make significant for our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 314.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08917197452 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83819254641 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7894206619 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304422263036 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992636881903 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797935794207 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158799387928 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049229237089 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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