What is the best invention of last 100 years: computer, antibiotics, and airplane? Explain why?
The important of computer which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that its beneficial which others reject this nation. The sustainable influence of computer has compulsory in daily life has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. in my opinion the former proposition appears to be more national, and this essay will further elaborate my reasons. for favoring the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons but the most conspicuous one stems from computer has a electronic machine. As an illustration computer play crucial role in our life. In addition mostly businessmen save our personal data in computer.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of computer, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that also people trained to waste of time logically also play games. For instance, there would be lack of lucrative contracts, no worship full of fans.
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of computer is prominent and the way I think lot of people use computer for some fake news should be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18269230769 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74183497382 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6873798931 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.04054605576 0.242375264174 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0157602583898 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205511031274 0.071462118173 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0246083522133 0.151781067708 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00475937133579 0.0609392437508 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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