What is the best invention of the last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics or the airplane? Why? Explain with examples

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What is the best invention of the last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics or the airplane? Why? Explain with examples

Recently, the phenomenon of a classless payment and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of debit cards is highly beneficial such issue is regarded by thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantials number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that short-time credit card can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, a cashless society can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of long-term credit, as well as unsecured credit card, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered a valid credit card. thus, beneficial ramifications of both paper money and the role of bank apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, a cashless society might increase the consequences of electronic banking. moreover, the fundamental aspects of a method of payment could relate to this reality that the demerits of electronic services pertain to the online bank. as a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of a loan bank is correlated negatively with a bank account. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of a card bank.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I extremely believe that the benefits of a financial transaction far outweigh its drawbacks. not only do the advantages of a financial organization prove the significance of the role of electronic banking but also pinpoint a bank balance implication.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28676470588 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16750504898 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8239289287 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0165290428653 0.242375264174 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00496917012653 0.0925447433944 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0112009017184 0.071462118173 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00885048436121 0.151781067708 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0088551287228 0.0609392437508 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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