What do you think about our environment considering the fact that there has been steady increase in pollution and affects like global warming are increasing as time is passing by? Are we under jeopardy? Is the humanity safe?
In this modern word, there is a growing problem of environment pollution to mankind. Some people argue that human being are in danger due to greenhouse affects and they discuss on the ways to minimize enviromental pollution together with it''s adverse affects. In this essay, I shall discuss on the causes of air pollution together with the methods of mitigating it.
Firstly, vehicular pollution is the main cause for green house affect and industrial revolution has also increased it to a greater extent. Some other factors like deforestation also worsen the situation as well. Apart from that, CFC gases used in refrigirators would also contribute for greenhouse affect. Moreover, air pollution adversely affect onn human health, specially on reprical problems for children.
On the other hand, people have to mitigate the negative impacts by encouraging people on forestation and they can also convert into public transportation in order to reduce carbon mission from their vehcles. Even that, people can use bicycles for their short distance travel requirement to avoid vehicular pollution. Besides that, air pollution affects precipitation cycle and even extreme wether condition such as floods, soil erosion and even tronadoes too.
In conclusion, governments can impose legislature to control vehicular pollution and also impose taxes on vehicles to discourage the purchases of vehicles. It is also beleived that, peole should change their attitudes in chieving this goal at least considering the next generation. Finally, individuals, governments and civil organization have to work together to achieve sustainable development which is a major priority in modern world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, so, well, apart from, at least, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 5.75862068966 365% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5859375 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91789292488 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6328125 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1424572447 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10800155227 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408425650052 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343208848185 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642082826438 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408179524463 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.