whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?
From ancient times the design of the building remained a burning topic among the people, which has become more controversial in recent years. Some people opine that architecture of a structure puts a negative effect, while others reckon that it has a positive effect on a person’s life. My opinion, however, coincides with the latter notion. This essay will elaborate on the viewpoints and hence lead to a reasoned conclusion.
To broach the discussion, the way a building is made whether for the commercial or residential purpose has a colossal impact on the daily life of a person. A house built with proper ventilation and enough space for air as well as sunlight increase the productivity of the residents. For example, many germs and bacteria’s can form up in the absence of sun rays causing various diseases. Moreover, congested structures of a workplace can decrease the efficiency of employees to a great extent. Hence, it is clear that the design of a building is indispensable for the overall wellbeing of an individual.
To embark this, another pivotal facet of the argument is that people working in a well-designed building feel proud and have a positive attitude towards the work. Not only does it contribute to various one’s psychological needs, but carefully designed building with the basic needs also empowers person working. Thus, needless to say, all these associated merits of the building will have a far-reaching positive effect when it comes to one’s psychological need.
To recapitulate, one can conclude that the design of building enables people to stay healthy and safe, and the merits associated with this are indeed too great to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17518248175 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00981398651 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1839057019 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332836719463 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926062990181 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853020691279 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170597541026 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685602728515 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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