Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?

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Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?

The design of building plays an important role in our today’s life and profession. many people believe that design of building will give on person development both in personal life and professional work. I completely agree with this statement that in modern world infrastructure plays a key role in personal life. Furthermore, we are elaborately going to discuss why design of building affects our daily life.

Firstly, innovative design motivates the people to work in good environment and it creates a good mind-set to feel their working place. Now a days, people are attracted to consult company because a proper infrastructure and design make them feel better. For example, design and building encourage the employees to work better and at the same time it will increase the productivity of workers and it leads to good profit for organization.

Secondly, infrastructure plays a vital role in our lives. In modern building with good ventilation and good space divide the healthy maintenance for young people. For example, design and building makes an innovative design and offer good privacy space will have a less chance to avoid disease like allergy, dust disease and many more. modern building provides enough space for employees.

According to the above arguments, it concludes that design of building will have positive impact on people’s life and work and meanwhile organizations and contractor need to take a new design with proper infrastructure by remembering people’s health in mind.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Many
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Suggestion: Modern
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41841004184 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01449263408 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535564853556 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0903280386 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376070905385 0.242375264174 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136805874464 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103908990782 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245752871814 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932937993823 0.0609392437508 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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