Whether the design of the buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?

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Whether the design of the buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?

one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge the number of people believing that design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However' I do not entirely accept the and I will explain why in this essay.

There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that design of building can not only contributes to people's life but also lead to numerious other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers,not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence excellence ">is concerned.

Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Beside, only when one follow such a system can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perserverance. Hence, it it ">isapparent why many are in favour of design of building.

In view of the arguments outlined above, one can can ">conclude that the bebefits of design of building building ">are indeed too great to ignore.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01606425703 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97189840441 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570281124498 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4522967707 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.545454545 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285533598466 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105262316244 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144178742043 0.071462118173 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179970131911 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141452522162 0.0609392437508 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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