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Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that how architecture of buildings influence people’s life and work. I, personally believe that design of buildings is largely connected with personal life and work. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important features of this essay before deducing any final conclusion.
At the outset there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that there is a strong impact of building structure on human’s life and work. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that commercial buildings are specifically designed for people to grab maximum attention of customers. Moreover, people feel themselves more comfortable and relaxed while shopping in wide shopping area. As a prime example, famous malls in UAE are designed in such an amazing pattern for tourists attraction.
Another, pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that building design also has a great impact on employees who are working there. In addition, workers are happy to choose proper ventilated and good structured work place to work in relaxed and comfortable environment and it would lead to better outcome from them.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that buildings have strong impact on person’s life and work. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48837209302 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90987390515 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8327239496 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0191857815539 0.242375264174 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00762910199648 0.0925447433944 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0162251946338 0.071462118173 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0107156087282 0.151781067708 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107643589469 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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