Which one is better, Textbook libarary or new digital materialin university. The role of library is keeping books obsolete. So univiersities use digital media. What is your opinion? Discuss advantages and disadvantages.
Now in the modern era, textbook library and new digital material in university or colleges is both are important. I opine that new digital material is more beneficial as compare to library textbooks. But, the digital material has some merits and demerits which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs before appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, technology increases day by day and it is very good for us. With the help of technology there are many new digital material are avialable in universities which is beneficial for students to learn new things nad it helps to do tough thing in easy way. Furthermore, the new digital material is portable because it stored in mobile phone. So, people study it in anywhere like while travelling one place to another. There are numerous application are in mobile phones with te help of these application students achieve good marks in papers.
Moreover, it contains some demerits also. Some individuals use the digital technology is bad way. Like, many students are cheat in the exam with the help of digital technology. Nowadays, technology increases but the unemployment was also increases because students learn from mobiles phones with the help of digital material so they don't need the teachers.
To concl, every thing have some merits and demerits the digital technology is also have some advantages and disadvantages. So, i opine that use these thing but in good way not in bad way because when we use anything in bad way they spoil our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02008032129 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72044410269 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510040160643 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7290213699 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20316131695 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803210748216 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051804908474 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135045882824 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467959736466 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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