Working and living abroad helps us to know others culture well. how far do you think working abroad has good or bad impacts an our culture lives?
The importance of working and living abroad which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion both proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both negative and positive effects of this trend and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that living abroad is beneficial for society as well as individual because they know about other country culture and established their business. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that working abroad grow the economic growth of others countries because masses get better knowledge about other country business. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence off this trend but one of the most alarming one is that people have lost their own culture and adopted other country culture so it is dangerous for society. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion, that the benefits of living and working abroad are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Suggestion:
...lost their own culture and adopted other country culture so it is dangerous for s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34979423868 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66653965048 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2710477657 50.4703680194 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208976045059 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705677011598 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711553179209 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126096282356 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050361783249 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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