"Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries.” According to
you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals.
The effect of the increase of xenophobia in western countries, which was always
debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial change in immigrants
who travel to other countries has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of
this trend on the accelerated increase of xenophobia in western societies in recent
years. It can be agreed that xenophobia has negative impacts, but some people claim
that it has some solutions also. This essay will elaborate how xenophobia has
increased and its solutions and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the xenophobia rate has accelerated
dramatically in western communities, but the most conspicuous stems from the fact
that there is a large of number of individuals immigrating around the world to developed
countries, as a result the locals start feeling discomfort because immigrants do not
share their same customs. For instance, in the las decades African refugees have
been suffering from discrimination and isolation due to their beliefs. xenophobia,
therefore, can play a vital role for locals who dislike immigrant’s traditions.
Approaches to deal with problems of increasing xenophobia are numerous, but the
most effective one is that government should promote tolerance and acceptance
campaigns to eradicate xenophobia incidents, which is not impracticable and
unattainable but comprehensible and feasible. As an illustration, governments should
encourage people to gather and share their culture and experiences as one
community. local governments, hence, can play a vital role for reducing hostility and
violence among locals and foreigners.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the
impact of xenophobia in western countries is prominent, although there are some
solutions that should be well handled.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Debatable
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...phobia in western societies in recent years. It can be agreed that xenophobia has n...
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...gative impacts, but some people claim that it has some solutions also. This essay ...
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Suggestion: as well
...ople claim that it has some solutions also. This essay will elaborate how xenophob...
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...say will elaborate how xenophobia has increased and its solutions and thus will lead to...
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Suggestion: Share
... discomfort because immigrants do not share their same customs. For instance, in th...
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...the las decades African refugees have been suffering from discrimination and isola...
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Suggestion: Xenophobia
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Suggestion: Unattainable
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... their culture and experiences as one community. local governments, hence, can play a v...
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...ure and experiences as one community. local governments, hence, can play a vital ro...
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Suggestion: Violence
...vital role for reducing hostility and violence among locals and foreigners. Fr...
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Suggestion: Solutions
...is prominent, although there are some solutions that should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89007092199 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19719741717 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3647764371 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.12807881773 581% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258410287939 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929630481778 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613628973807 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639935548634 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526230921005 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 12.6369458128 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.