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The effect of the increase of xenophobia in western countries, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial change in immigrants who travel to other countries has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the accelerated increase of xenophobia in western societies in recent years. it can be agreed that xenophobia has negative impacts, but some people claim that it has some solutions also. this essay will elaborate how xenophobia has increased and its solutions and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the xenophobia rate has accelerated dramatically in western communities, but the most conspicuous stems from the fact that there is a large of number of individuals immigrating around the world to developed countries, as a result the locals start feeling discomfort because immigrants do not share their same customs. For instance, in the las decades African refugees have been suffering from discrimination and isolation due to their beliefs. xenophobia, therefore, can play a vital role for locals who dislike immigrant’s traditions.
Approaches to deal with problems of increasing xenophobia are numerous, but the most effective one is that government should promote tolerance and acceptance campaigns to eradicate xenophobia incidents, which is not impracticable and unattainable but comprehensible and feasible. As an illustration, governments should encourage people to gather and share their culture and experiences as one community. local governments, hence, can play a vital role for reducing hostility and violence among locals and foreigners.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of xenophobia in western countries is prominent, there are some solutions that should be well handled. (281 words)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64664310954 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1921213991 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.2422965863 50.4703680194 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.272727273 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0658579685078 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233390531869 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352665448063 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041222475003 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181048740625 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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