Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?

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Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?

Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries has been one of prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. I would say it is happening mainly due to different reasons and can be solved by implementing the solutions discuss in this essay.
To commence with, there are certain reason behind this notion. First and foremost cause is thinking process of people as well as culture heritage in which foreign masses hate from other people because they has different colour of skin and belong to different religion. Moreover, increasing in competitions of job sector so people has migrated from one country to another for the purpose of hired job. This leads to racism between society and foreign countries.
However, every dark cloud has a silver lining. Therefore the present problem can be overcome by taking some measure. One of the major step in this direction is government should organize awareness programs and educate their citizens . Moreover, promote respect for foreigners in different institutes as well as hate aspects should be made punishable.
In conclusion, in the end this problem should be controlling by the time to time otherwise it lead planet at the end.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ses hate from other people because they has different colour of skin and belong to ...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
..., every dark cloud has a silver lining. Therefore the present problem can be overcome by ...
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Suggestion: .
...ness programs and educate their citizens . Moreover, promote respect for foreigner...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...mote respect for foreigners in different institutes as well as hate aspects shoul...
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...e end this problem should be controlling by the time to time otherwise it lead pl...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...lling by the time to time otherwise it lead planet at the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1712962963 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7602724955 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2628127962 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136663933506 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445992652697 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506857277995 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781179130142 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621668328308 0.0609392437508 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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