You are given climate as the field of study. Which area would you prefer? Explain why you picked this up the particular area for your study?
World climate is changing these days as a result of global warming. Deforestation and globalization are primary reasons for this massive change. Given climate as a field of study, I would prefer an area, probably Asian subcontinent, which observe all types of seasons like summer, autumn, winter etcetera. I have myriads of reasons for choosing this region.
To begin with, in order to study various aspects of different seasons like amount of rainfall, maximum or minimum temperature in various seasons, it is pivotal to choose a region which experiences all types of seasons in an year. Further, it is a well known fact that countries in Asian subcontinent like India are developing countries where deforestation is maximum. I will be able to learn deleterious effects of deforestation on climate.
Moreover, developing countries also has more polluted cities, pollution can be both air and water pollution. This will help us to understand the effects of pollution on climate change like how pollution causes fog or myst creation in atmosphere.
Hence to conclude, developing countries of Asian subcontinent like India, Nepal etcetera will be my region of choice to understand effects of modernization like deforestation and pollution on climate change and global warming. These learnings will help us to deduce possible ways to protect and preserve our environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ich experiences all types of seasons in an year. Further, it is a well known fact ...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ses fog or myst creation in atmosphere. Hence to conclude, developing countries ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...og or myst creation in atmosphere. Hence to conclude, developing countries of As...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37962962963 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02559667731 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6465812098 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112963673044 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464688894079 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632751997424 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731494255397 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868407864132 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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