27) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the beginning of the birth and the death of a human being life is full of compromising or adjusting. Yes i agree that people should do things that they do not enjoy doing. It may be personal or professional life is always filled with adjustments.
First of all, compromising applies to all age groups, no one can escape from doing things which they don't like. Sometimes people are obligated to do things which they are not interested in doing. For instance, if you tell a kid to getup early and study which they are not willing to do but because of the parents force the kid will getup early. Whether its a kid or adult daily we all do things which we dislike doing. Likewise, my friend is a fashion designer and works in a boutique. Whenever my friend comes with creative design her boss do not agree and she end up doing her boss's choice. We are obligated to make others happy or sometimes its your duty to obey which is against your likes.
In addition, from morning to night there are so many things that we don't feel like doing, but we push ourselves to complete it. We all have certain dreams and aspirations some fulfilled but many others that remain unfulfilled. But we have to digest the fact and move on. For example, as per my observation, in my country children who have completed 12th grade and need to decide on bachelors degree (especially doctor or engineer degrees), many children are obligated by their parents and end up studying according to their parents wish. Some parents go according to their status or see what others children do.
Furthermore, personal or professional everywhere we need to push ourselves and do the work. If a person stands against to do the work, which is not interesting for him/her, then the society calls him/her a stubborn.
To sum up, life is always about compromise, so no one can escape from it. The work which we don't like can make the opposite person happy or satisfied. Every-time people won't get chance to do work according to their desires.
It may be personal or professional life is always filled with adjustments.
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