Beside John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King which other leader do you admire and give reasons to support.

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Beside John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King which other leader do you admire and give reasons to support.

A leader lays a path that can be followed by others. This part is a result of great ideas, continuous perseverance, persistence to follow ones own dreams, ability to believe in oneself even if the world doesn't and most importantly the ability to follow a strict code of moral values. Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King are the epitome of the before mentioned qualities. Another great leader that has remarkable achievements is Mahatma Gandhi.

Gandhi was a simple man but had ideologies that were considered complex during his era. He was a strong believer in non-violence and a...

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Sentence: His willingness to quit his successful career as a barrister and to fight for the independence of the country show the level of patriotism that this man possessed.
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Sentence: THis would inclyde peaceful and persistent processions to fight against injsutice.
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Sentence: In order to amke the poor people employed and occupied Ganghi also contributged to creating emplyment opportunities.
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