Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their parents for a longer time. Which of these situations you think is better?

Essay topics: Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their parents for a longer time. Which of these situations you think is better?

khozaima's picture

Young adults are sensitive group of people. There are lot of emotional and moral changes that happen to an individual during this period. This phase of life is considered as the molding phase of life. The attitude and the behavior to face problems ahead in life is developed during this time. Family plays an important role in influencing young adults. Family care and support, indeed would be beneficial during this period. But, extra care and concern would be rejected by young adults and would be considered mostly as an interference.

Independent life away from parents has its own advantages. Many young adults opt for this reason fairly because of two reasons. Firstly, because they get worke ...

Note: Only testbig VIP readers can access the full content of this essay.

Subscribe now as testbig VIP readers and get unlimited access to essays on the top list.

Essay Categories: 
Votes: 
Average: 8.5 (2 votes)
This essay topic by other users:
Post date Users Rates More about the essay
1 week 18 hours ago toeflgirl 70 Read full essay
1 week 1 day ago dasepular 60 Read full essay
2 weeks 2 days ago Hardy1991 70 Read full essay
1 month 1 week ago vengalraoguttha 66 Read full essay
1 month 1 week ago farhadmoqimi 70 Read full essay
1 month 2 weeks ago fredericomasc 70 Read full essay
2 months 4 days ago jessicaguo78 73 Read full essay
2 months 4 days ago jessicaguo78 73 Read full essay
2 months 1 week ago Dharapatel23 70 Read full essay
3 months 15 hours ago luoluomelody 60 Read full essay

Pages

More essays by this user:

Pages

Comments

Sentence: Also since the young adults are now on their the basic need of survival would become important.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by the
Suggestion: Refer to their and the

Sentence: Since parents help is absent they would tend to make new relationships and contact with new people to seek help and assistance.This would increase their social interaction skills.
Description: The fragment parents help is is rare
Suggestion: Since parent's help is absent

Sentence: They would now be more cautious with their money and learn to have aproper control over their budget.
Error: aproper Suggestion: a proper

Sentence: It is completely an indivduals choice.
Error: indivduals Suggestion: individuals

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.821 21.0

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 443 350
No. of Characters: 2174 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.588 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.907 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.432 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.821 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.949 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.321 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.439 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.108 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

Pages