Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why
you think it has changed people’s lives.
• automobiles
• bicycles
• airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the time of emergence of human civilization many mind boggling findings have been changing the choice of transportation from time to time. Hence among the three transportation vehicles, airplanes are the most significant means to transform the way of life for almost everyone around the world. Contemporary world is dependent upon the airplanes to flourish the businesses and all the other walks of life. Airplanes are considered to be the fastest and safest vehicle, which has shrunk the huge world into a small village as well.
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