A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose your factory? Explain your position.
Development of any kind always brings in prosperity for the community. However along with prosperity comes in certain issues that cannot be ignored. Same is the case with the building of the factory near our community. Taking into consideration both sides of the coin, I will support the construction for the sake of development of my community.
Obviously with the factory being close to the community there will be a sharp rise in job opportunities. People will no longer need to travel far away leaving their loved ones behind in search of jobs. Also there will be better roads and transportatio...
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Sentence: If they agree to dispose of their waste properly, use the latest equipment that make no noise and reduce the air pollution will I support their factory.
Description: The fragment that make no is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
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