Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important for governments to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for the future generations

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for governments to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for the future generations.

With the progress of times and development of technology, our economy has been sky-rocketing enhancing. it reveals that all the aspects are showing a phenomenon of booming. However, when go deep in sight into the problem of development, we gain some profits and merits at the sacrifice of damages in environment. Hence, the deteriorated environment will lead to an intensive extinctions nowadays. Moreover, at that time, human will extinct as the example of extinction of dinosaurs ,which dominant the earth at Jurassic Period.In conclusion, we ought to protect wild animals as soon as we can for the sake of rescuing our future generations.

First of all, with our environment getting worse gradually , the wild animal will lose their habitats in a high speed, which lead to a substantial extinctions currently. In the ancient time , with the balance of environment, because human exploiting the resource are at the control of government, the environment such as lakes, forests and basins, could adjust to the human behaviors. Whereas, today, human behaviors such as farming, cutting the tree and manufacturing are out of control of government, thus the balance of environment has been broken. Meanwhile, Numerous illegal behavior can not be banned due to lack of severe laws which restrict the illegal behaviors. So the ecologic environment is getting worse. Finally, an immense amount of habitats and wilderness areas are destroyed due to behaviors of human. Hence, it is essential for government itself to take some measures such as planting more trees, invent recyling water machines etc.

Secondly, while individuals only can stop the illegal behaviors which have a bad effect on environment, they can not punish the people which destroy our surroundings. However, government could enact some policy and laws to restrict the behaviors of human efficiently. As we know quite well, many people hunt the nearly extinct animals such as antelope tiger and panda. These animal are absolutely in the protection program in nation laws. But hunters are careless about the laws since these laws can not actually be emphasized. If the government enact more policy and laws to punish the people who bring about damage to the wilderness areas, it will dramatically decrease the frequency of illegal behaviors which destroy the habitat. For instance, in the Qing Zang province of my country, at a few years ago, large quantities of people made a living by hunting the antelope , a rare specie in the world. However, thanks to the Laws restricted on the hunting behavior at next few years, which claims that people who are still hunting the antelope will be seemed as death sentence, the hunters cease the behavior of hunting and earn a living by doing business. So the government actually plays a active role in the protection of wilderness regions.

Last but not least, government could evokes awareness of citizens in their nation. Currently, numerous organizations , which seem protecting the wild animals as their goals, have been ignored by the society. But, the governor could help these organization evoke the people's consciousness to protect the wild animals .Meawhile government could remind people of not doing damages to our environment and wilderness areas. Moreover, government ought to appeal people to make some contributions to the animal habitat. Thus, government careness and evoking are a great approaches to keep people protecting animals' habitats.

By and large, even though the horrible environmental conditions exist around us, government still have numerous methods and approaches such as protecting on his own , enacting the laws, and evoking awareness of people to keep wilderness areas from damages. These efforts can be taken in to consideration on the evaluation
, namely whether it is crucial for governments to protect the wilderness areas for the future generations.

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Sentence: If the government enact more policy and laws to punish the people who bring about damage to the wilderness areas, it will dramatically decrease the frequency of illegal behaviors which destroy the habitat.
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Sentence: Last but not least, government could evokes awareness of citizens in their nation.
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Sentence: Hence, it is essential for government itself to take some measures such as planting more trees, invent recyling water machines etc.
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