Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Telephones and E mail have made communication between people less personal Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephones and E-mail have made communication between people less personal. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion?

Today communication is one of the most important issues in human life. people need to have relation with each other to be able to continue their life .there are several type of communication media for people for instance phone ,email, mobile , internet chat and even face to face interaction. In my view using some new method of communication like email and phone is not only harmful for human’s relationship but also is very vital, because of two important reason.

The main reason is staying in touch. Today people because of working in their work place or study in university ,are distributed along the city or even country, so they have less face to face communication with their family or friends ,so phone and email solved this problem .For instance two years ago I studied in Berlin in Germany where was not my mother country so I just could call or send email to my family and friends because I did not have any other communication way, so I believe email and phone are very useful media in human life.

Another important argument is saving time and speed in email or phone call .most of the time people does not have enough time for visiting each other or maybe it is not possible to come or back to each other’s city because of lack of time or money, but now they can use email or phone to interact and speak together .For example this year in Christmas I could not went to all of my friends house and congratulate them but with help of phone I called all of them in an hour and greet all of them without wasting any time or money for going from an place to another. So I found it email and phone are very useful in today’s complex life.

In my opinion email and phone not only persisted against reducing personal relations but also increased it .How I mentioned staying in touch and communicating with a very little expense are the gift of email and telephone. Everyone for having constant interaction with family or friends have to use email and phone.

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Sentence: For example this year in Christmas I could not went to all of my friends house and congratulate them but with help of phone I called all of them in an hour and greet all of them without wasting any time or money for going from an place to another.
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