INTEGRATED ESSAY- REGULATION AND DEREGULATION. KAPLAN'S
summarize both the passage and the lecture. Then explain how the passage and the lecture differs from each other.
The passage mainly describes that market regulation is a trend that was introduced in 1887 as the interstate commerce commision, which is usually created by the politicians, producers or consumers that controls the price, route,transportation services. In addition, it mentions some of the advantages of the regulatory system over the deregulation . However, the lecture disagrees with the passage citing some recent examples of the deregulation. She puts emphasis on the advantages of the deregulatory trend.
The first advantage the lecturer points out is that the hike of the price is actual...
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Sentence: The passage mainly describes that market regulation is a trend that was introduced in 1887 as the interstate commerce commision, which is usually created by the politicians, producers or consumers that controls the price, route,transportation services.
Error: commision Suggestion: commission
Sentence: Therefore, we can infer from this that the hike in the price without any significant improvement in the level of quality is mainly due to the series of mergers and the aquisitors.
Error: aquisitors Suggestion: ?
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